After a different group seeing our film this is what feedback we got:
- Title sequence- too simple, white on black
- Framing- cut off faces
- Handheld- shaky/messy
- Focus- in and out (unintentional)
- Continuity error 2.41 180degrees and at 3.39
- Slow
- Costume?
- Good lighting
- Music worked
- Good range of angles
- Nice Colour
After showing our film to everyone this is what we got back from everyone:
- Could not tell if the shakiness at the beginning was on purpose.
- Music was good
- Colour balance was good
- Day 4- the paste needs to be picked up
- The area where Max slept, the shoes and clothes do not need be to shot and the 2nd shot of him sleeping is not needed either
- Maybe with the titles for Day 1,2,3,4,5,6 maybe they could have be 1,2,5,10 or not even needed
- Good transition of night to day where Max runs off into the distance
- There was no music credits for Mike and Dave
- Nice edit
- Story is clear and it worked
- More tine in music, needed to be lifted a bit near the end
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